I fully enjoyed the story. The Characters and cycle of Tye, Mari, and The Tall man keep the novel exciting and fresh. I think CT Scribe also did very well with the world building and how the organization of the Immortals function. I was also a big fan of Tye’s Weapons. I liked the pacing as well, everything seemed to flow freely.
All CT Scribe really need is just spacing on some paragraphs and watch out for tense change, and a few misspellings but nothing is perfect. Hell, my novel has the same issues lol. However, I believe CT Scribe is on his way to making a cool ass series. I could see this as a cool TV show on Netflix or something. Keep it up!
